This would be good but...

You need to fix the text... sometimes it's a little hard to see and you should never ever submit unfinished work. Just wait for your computer to work again and then finish it up.

It was funny =D

Yeah even though the animation wasn't amazing, it fit well with the style and the humour. I personally am a playstation fan, but I still found this really funny. Good job, dude. =D

Solid scripting but lacking polish

It was good, you definitely have the essentials down, but maybe you should try to shine it up a bit first. Try adding some background music in, maybe spruce up the graphics a little more. The character models are fine but the level design is a little boring, try adding backgrounds.

Overall it was pretty good, but lacking in a few key areas. A few more layers of polish and you would have a solid game.

Oh and I love the menu screen hahaha it was pretty sweeeet.

I really really liked it.

It was a nice simple game that was much much more intense then its predecesor. Great game and I'm glad you fixed so many of the flaws of Space Bear 1. Great game.